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Sunday, March 14, 2010

Crass Transit : A Sunday Haiku (UPDATED)


trains and trains and trains
people bags and noisome odors
derail, impale me

Pheewrap said...

Line two should only have seven syllables.

He's right. This haiku, like its topic, is intrinsically flawed.