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Sunday, March 14, 2010
Crass Transit : A Sunday Haiku (UPDATED)
trains and trains and trains
people bags and noisome odors
derail, impale me
Pheewrap said...
Line two should only have seven syllables.
March 14, 2010 8:49 PM
He's right. This haiku, like its topic, is intrinsically flawed.
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Pheewrap
March 14, 2010 at 8:49 PM
Line two should only have seven syllables.
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